Just give me a minute. I have to pick my jaw up off the floor.
Jeff hunting down the tail and killing him was way hotter than I was expecting. The image of Jeff, switchblade in hand, is burned in my brain.
I love how action packed this is. Sometimes fic can be so passive, but this, this reads like a great chase scene in a movie. My heart beats faster, I shift forward in my seat, my breathing gets erratic. Again, another masterfully written chapter.
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Date: 2007-05-04 02:49 am (UTC)Jeff hunting down the tail and killing him was way hotter than I was expecting. The image of Jeff, switchblade in hand, is burned in my brain.
I love how action packed this is. Sometimes fic can be so passive, but this, this reads like a great chase scene in a movie. My heart beats faster, I shift forward in my seat, my breathing gets erratic. Again, another masterfully written chapter.