*This* part is fantastic! I don't even know where to start in saying what I liked about it. *gropes for words*
I love how sweet and funny Jensen is underneath the pain and skittishness. I'm definitely wondering what's happened to him to make him so wary of love. He's fine with "just sex", but let them show tenderness and he's ready to run. He really doesn't believe he's worth anything and his complete inability to comprehend *why* Jeff and Jared care about and want him with them is so sad.
Jeff *seems* resigned, but I'm doubting he'll accept Jensen's decision so easily. He'll likely be subtle about doing anything. Jared, now...if he's as pissed at it seemed like at the end, he might beat Jensen or something. It's definitely going to be awkward on the set, in any case!
I noticed that in both fics, Jensen didn't climax until Jeff told him to come. I'm wondering if that's a co-incidence, or deliberate? The whole rec room scene was hot. The pool table sex especially was...*flails*...and then Jesen made that *sound*, simply *wrenched* from him, and then he was lying, trembling in their arms after...geez. Words fail.
I told you, until the next part comes out, I'm going to be wishful thinking like mad. There *will* be a next part, right...?
This was as well-written as the previous parts. I loved it, can you tell? Thanks for sharing it, both of you.
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Date: 2007-04-02 05:08 am (UTC)I love how sweet and funny Jensen is underneath the pain and skittishness. I'm definitely wondering what's happened to him to make him so wary of love. He's fine with "just sex", but let them show tenderness and he's ready to run. He really doesn't believe he's worth anything and his complete inability to comprehend *why* Jeff and Jared care about and want him with them is so sad.
Jeff *seems* resigned, but I'm doubting he'll accept Jensen's decision so easily. He'll likely be subtle about doing anything. Jared, now...if he's as pissed at it seemed like at the end, he might beat Jensen or something.
It's definitely going to be awkward on the set, in any case!
I noticed that in both fics, Jensen didn't climax until Jeff told him to come. I'm wondering if that's a co-incidence, or deliberate? The whole rec room scene was hot. The pool table sex especially was...*flails*...and then Jesen made that *sound*, simply *wrenched* from him, and then he was lying, trembling in their arms after...geez. Words fail.
I told you, until the next part comes out, I'm going to be wishful thinking like mad. There *will* be a next part, right...?
This was as well-written as the previous parts. I loved it, can you tell? Thanks for sharing it, both of you.
Pesti