Wow, y'all. I just, like, mainlined that story. In about 3 hours. I'll try to remember to come back and give more detailed feedback later when my brain comes back cuz it bugs like hell when people are all 'I can't tell you why your story rocks but it does so yay you!' but it's late and my brain is buzzing with images and thoughts and questions and mainly I'm just a quivering mass of OH DEAN!! So, sorry but about all I got right now is I can't tell you why your story rocks but it does so yay you.

Am so very fiercely anticipating more of this world. Kudos to y'all.