ext_32306 ([identity profile] glitterglam13.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] beanside 2007-04-24 08:19 pm (UTC)

First things first: love love love love this 'verse from top to bottom. Now that's out of the way, I really like that you chose to have Jeff know Jensen's after him this early on. I think it helps to take the suspense of the story through much more interesting and original paths than the more traditional When's Jensen going to try to kill Jeff? It opens so many possibilities, broadens the spectrum of issues and forces Jeff's hand with Jared. Just lovely.

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