ext_855 ([identity profile] angiepen.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] beanside 2007-03-02 12:01 pm (UTC)

Here from the rec on [livejournal.com profile] slavefics. [wave] This was really good, even though I've never seen Supernatural and only recognize three of the characters. I probably missed a few in-jokes or whatever but I enjoyed the story and the character interactions. This doesn't really feel like a finished story -- I'm hoping there'll be more and that you'll link to [livejournal.com profile] slavefics? :)

I like the world you've created. It holds together well enough that my disbelief was merely suspended rather than hung by the neck until it was dead :) and I thought you did a good job fitting the characters into that world. I particularly liked this bit:

Jared had learned not to be ashamed of his scars; Jeff was ashamed of his lack of them.

That's a very telling sentence. [wince/nod]

Good stuff -- I hope there's more.

Angie

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